难忘的一件事英语作文4篇 作文初一（精选19篇）

犹如一阵风吹动了心灵，吹动了那些沉睡的回忆，这迫使我再次踏上了那曾经拼命想离开的土地。往日的喧闹声、嘈杂声、喃喃声、呵斥声再次涌上了心底，如野马脱缰一般一经唤起便不能忘记。心里那株百合花再次绽放在了心底，纯纯的花香和着迷人的情愫融入了鼻息，唤起了那段拨动心弦的初一生活的回忆。

YOUAREMYWATER

你们是水，我是鱼，我生活在你们的滋润里。同学，在初一生活中如雨露，滋润了百合，养护了心灵，我生活在你们浓浓的爱里，或许有时吵闹，或许有时互相打击，但我们彼此都明白，这是一种情谊，这是一种爱意，这样的“吵闹”与“打击”铸就了我们初一生活的美丽。就要离别，大家并肩而行，长亭外，古道边，互诉离情——勿忘我。

YOUAREMYLIGHTS

学海无涯，我们苦苦追寻，如同在黑暗中行进的人，时常迷茫与彷徨，一不小心就会坠落到黑暗中去，如履薄冰。“春蚕到死丝方尽”老师如一只红烛，为我们照亮前方的路，在书海捕捉知识的倩影，在学校里领悟人性的光明，在实践中树立良好的心态，确定价值取向，人生追求。老师在带领我们垂钓，抛下晦暗、低俗赢得高贵、纯洁，是我们每个人都能够满载而归。

YOUAREMYALLTHINGS

从我出生，我就注定要为了你而奋斗，你使我迎来了一批批的同学与老师，我和你的缘分注定要一生缠绵下去。在初一的生活里，我为你而喜悦，我为你而哭泣，知识——你是我的全部，百合花因你而开放，书香气撒满花瓣。“路漫漫己修远兮吾将上下而求索”初一的百合虽然已经凋谢，但以后的玫瑰才刚刚开放，生命不息，奋斗不止，我将一生为你追求下去。

美丽的百合花，淡淡的书卷气，涩涩的味道——我的初一生活，让我沉迷。清雅的百合花在梦靥里依旧i吐露芬芳“衣带渐宽终不悔，为‘你’消得人憔悴。”

作者文思涌动，文采飞扬，如“心里那株百合花再次绽放在了心底，纯纯的花香和着迷人的情愫融入了鼻息”，一气呵成。结构整饬，以并列句分别总领三个段落，形式与内容完美融合。

There are many things in life，then a smile for the teacher，I feel very proud.It is a writing competition the sixth grade next semester，I won the two prize

Remember that time I very want to join in the game，the Chinese teacher to inform youthe game news，I first signed up，want to cherish this opportunity.But every class onlyallows two students to participate in，my composition level is on the level of our class，even I myself dont expect.The day the teacher told me to go to the office，"the report!" "Please come in." Chinese teacher said slowly："you sign up to participate in the essay contest，you have what idea?" "I." I make an ambiguous statement to say a word.The Chinese teacher relieved smile，said："never mind，have what idea to say.The competition you are the first one to sign up，oneself at that time is how to think?"See the teacher a reassuring smile，I finally plucked up the courage to breath to say："I wrote a composition in the class is not the best，but I want to seize this opportunity，also can exercise my composition level.I want to have a try." The Chinese teacher is asmile，picked up a piece of paper from the table handed to me："this is I make the playlist，you see it first." My hands and took the piece of paper has a name was."I!" I could not help but exclaim aloud.The Chinese teacher smiled and nodded."I would choose you because of your courage.And your writing skills but also good." Chinese teacher always looked at me and smiled."You can，go home to prepare yourself properly，we have classes on you!" Chinese teacher said saw me out of the office，however，my heart a long time can not be calm.

The contest I overachieving，unexpectedly won a prize two."Awesome!" The teacherthat brief language and blooming smile，makes me very proud.This game let me really understand，everyone is not trivial，even ordinary people，there will be others appreciate attention.It will be my successful book，the source of happiness.

Lets take a look at the weather in Shanxi Province for the next 24 hours.Taiyuan would be cloudy at the time with the temperature from eighteen to twenty-eight.A strong wind would reach Datong, which could cause much rain,The temperature would be sixteen to twenty-six.Yangquan would be sunny with the highest temperature of thirty degree. Linfen would be windy and its temperature would be twenty-three to thirty-two.We would have a sunny and hot day in Yuncheng.Its temperature would stay between twenty-eight to thirty-four.

如果说家是世界上最温馨的地方，那学校就是第二个家了！

记得上学期期末的时候，第二天就要期末考试了，我却病倒了，难忘的一个同学作文。老师在讲台上讲课，我在课桌前捂着头，有气无力地爬在桌子上，这时，老师关切地问我：“王家兴，你怎么了？”我无力地说：“老师，我难受的不行，头痛！”老师又问：“你能受得了吗？要不回宿舍去吧！”“老师明天就要考试了，我能挺的住。”到了下课，老师还是让徐福元同学送我回宿舍。

那天正是冬季，天气很冷，就连不怕冷的老师们也都披上了羽绒服。

在回宿舍的路上，徐福元硬是要把他的衣服给我穿上，我怎么也推辞不掉，最好还是给我披上了他的外套，他挠了挠头，用手揉了一下鼻子笑了。瞬间心头涌上了一股感激与辛酸……别看徐福元平日学习一般，但对别人非常友善，所以人缘一直不错。

回到宿舍，我躺在床上非常难受，正在这时，又是徐福元，他拿着一版药片送到了我的受里，这时又一股感激涌上心头，他帮我倒了一杯水，放在床头，等我喝完了药，他就匆匆忙忙的回班里上自习了。我也随之睡着了。

等我晕晕沉沉的醒来，发现床头旁有一个饭盒，饭盒上有一张小字条，上面写着：“饭，我帮你打回来了，小心点，别下床——徐福元。”顿时感激的泪水夺眶而出。看着这个饭盒，我的心情久久不能平静。

徐福元，他的学习不怎么好，我曾经还看不起他，但是今天，他的举动，使我从新认识了他，他让我很感动，因为他有一颗金子般的心。他是我学习的榜样，也是我终身难忘的好朋友。

I went to Hainan Island with my parents for a holidy and we stayed there

for a week. It took us only more than three hours to get to Haikou airport. We

enjoyed the warm sunshine and the softwind. We walked on the beach and picked up

the beautiful shells. We also sufed on the waves and it was really exciting. We

played ball games on the beach as well. I believed Hainan was really an

attractive city with famous beach and mountains. We really enjoyed the beautiful

scenery of Hainan.

风儿刮起，乌云密布，天空突然下起了豆大的雨。“哗哗哗，哗哗哗”得倾泻而下，灰蒙蒙的天上挂着珠帘，叫人在雨中有丝毫停留的勇气。

就在这样一个风雨交加的夜晚，我们学校的教学楼居然停电了。好家伙，停电了我们可怎么进行夜自修啊。

没过多久，不远处传来了急促的脚步声。“哒哒哒，哒哒哒”，从远处传来“叮呤”“叮呤”的自行车铃响。 “丁玲”，“丁玲”.一个骑自行车的人靠近了我们教室，我看到他身穿绿军装，再仔细一看原来是学校后勤保卫科的赵大叔。

赵大叔的头发、衣服都被雨湿透了，骑自行车要向各个班级递送停电时候使用的蜡烛。每个班级是20只蜡烛。接过蜡烛的时候，我看到赵大叔全身上下都被雨淋得湿漉漉。看到这一幕，我不由地感到赵大叔真的很辛苦，连忙说了一句：“赵大叔，你辛苦了！”赵大叔微笑地说：“本职工作嘛，你们这所教学楼蜡烛都在这了，我这要去下一栋楼。”说罢，赵大叔骑着自行车匆匆离去了，赵大叔的身影很快消失在雨夜中。

望着赵大叔远去的背影，我感慨良多，那就是令我至今难忘的身影。

It was the Lantern Festival, and my parents took me to the Confucius temple to see the Lantern Festival. Along the way, it was drizzling. One to the Confucius temple, the eyes are all lights, as if into the light of the sea. The lotus lantern on the left, the advertising lamp on the right, looks like two soaring dragons.

After that, my parents took me to the lantern market to buy lanterns. What a lot of lanterns! There are rabbit lights, pigeon lights, and dog lights... I looked back and forth several times. It was dazzling. I was dazzled, didnt know which to buy? Finally, I bought an antique candle lamp.

Then mom and dad took me to the pedal boat. Because of the festival, so many people, lined up a long team. We chose a goose boat, my father and mother pedaled, and I held the rudder. We had a happy Lantern Festival.

Someone says: are you a silkworm, spit of the continuous filament and die. Someone says: you are the candle, to the best of the last drop of tears to illuminate the dark night sky; Someone said, you are the morning dew, often before dawn, moistens the land silently all things... You, is my respected teacher, non-existent.

Non-existent with tall, round face, with two arch eyebrows on his forehead, under the arch eyebrows with a pair of bright and sharp eyes, she has a plausible mouth, a smile, mouth petal meniscus as quiet.

Non-existent at ordinary times is very strict with our requirements. Each lesson learned to write the book of copying, will ask us to write the word is very good, to write bad words will never let go, until it is written. Words because some students in our class wrote too fast and some bad, non-existent will let them change to come over, we all have greatly improved.

Non-existent also care about us. Remember once, I was a bit uncomfortable, go to the clinic under temperature, amount of 37.5 degrees, non-existent just said to me: "if uncomfortable, he said to the teacher, the teacher will and parents said." Non-existent for we really care about.

Teacher, I salute you! Is that you get ignorant we into the space of knowledge, sowing love with you that like the sound of a song! Like a candle, burn yourself, you give we lit the fire of hope, with your persistent enthusiasm to guide us to open our science maze! Thank you, teacher!

有人说：你是春蚕，吐不尽那绵绵的细丝至死方休!有人说：你是蜡烛，洒尽最后一滴泪去照亮漆黑的夜空;还有人说：你是朝露，常在黎明到来之前，默默地滋润着大地万物……你，就是我敬爱的老师——汤老师。

汤老师长着高高的个子，圆圆的脸蛋，额上长着两道柳眉，柳眉下嵌着一双明亮而又锐利的眼睛，她还有一张能说会道的嘴巴，一笑起来，嘴瓣儿像恬静的弯月。

汤老师平时对我们的要求很严格。每次学完课写《习字册》的时候，都会要求我们把字写得非常端正，对写的不好的字决不放过，直到写好为止。班里有几个同学的字因为写得太快而有些不好，汤老师就会让他们改过来，使我们都有很大的提高。

汤老师还很关心我们。记得有一次，我有点不舒服，去医务室量了下温度，37.5度，汤老师就跟我说：“如果不舒服，就跟老师说，老师就会和家长说的。”汤老师对我们真的非常关心。

老师，我向您致敬!是您把懵懂的我们领进知识的太空，用您那如歌的声音把爱播种!您像蜡烛一样燃烧了自己，给我们点燃希望的火种，用您那执著热情指引我们打开科学的迷宫!谢谢您，老师!

March 12th is Tree Planting Day. This year our school bought enough trees before that day. On that day, we didn‘t had classes. The teachers and our classmates planted trees around our school.

We began to planted trees as soon as we got to school. some students dug the holes. Some students put the trees into the holes.

Some students put the earth back to the holes. Then we pushed the earth hard with our feet. At last we watered the trees as much as possible.

From then on we looked after the trees carefully and the trees grew very well. It made our shcool more beautiful .And How happy we are!

3月12日是植树的一天。今年我们学校买了足够的树在那一天之前。在那一天,我们没有课。我们学校周围的老师和同学们种植的树木。

我们开始种植树木一旦我们到达学校。一些学生挖洞。一些学生把树放进洞。

一些学生把地球回洞。然后我们把地球与我们的脚。最后我们尽可能多的树木浇水。

从那时起我们仔细照顾树木,树木生长得很好。它使我们的学校更美丽。我们是多么快乐!

每个人在生活中，总会有搭车的经验，时间可能会长或短的，距离可能是或远或近的，总之，人是不可能不坐车的。只是，每一个人在车上的时光是枯燥乏味的，还是充满欢乐的，可就因人而异了。

记得有一次，从学校要坐公交车回家的时候，在公交车站那边等了快二十分钟，心情十分烦躁。但当我一上车，发现宁静的气味、悠静的气味、安静的气味弥漫了整辆巴士，让人产生一种轻轻的、静静的、放松心情的感受，感觉紧绷的精神在剎那间放松了下来，这种宁静像是舒服的安眠曲，让人的心灵舒畅，让人的心情自由，不用受到压力的禁锢，繁忙的监禁，还有课业的束缚。

搭公交车回家的路上，我发现城市的街道、巷子都变得比平常还来的更美！不管是大楼住户的灯光，还是在街角闪烁的霓虹灯，都在那种悠静气氛的衬托下，显得更加美好。本来烦躁的心情，也渐渐地舒缓了下来。

那是一次难忘的车上时光，聆听那幽静，疗癒着一天下来不安、易怒、烦躁的心灵；聆听那幽静，不让内心被课业给捆绑；聆听那幽静，享受在车上发呆、幻想的乐趣。在车上的时光，彷彿充满幻想的天国，充满自由的王国，充满快乐的世界，带我到一个无忧无虑的世界，沉浸在那幽静、缤纷的幻想世界。

[初一作文：难忘的车上时光

An unforgettable thing during Summer vacation

暑期难忘的一件事

It was a sunny day today,when I got up in the morning, I decided to see my grandparents. So I took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me, and I was very happy, too.

今天天气不错,太阳天.当我早上醒来,我决定去看看爷爷奶奶,所以我乘巴士中午到了那里,爷爷奶奶看到我很开心,而且我也很开心。

In the afternoon, my farther asked me to help him water the plant, and I was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

下午爸爸叫我帮他给植物浇水,看到那些在风中微笑的花儿我很开心。

In a word, today is a unforgetive day. because I saw my relatives and helped people.

总的说来,今天是难忘的一天.因为我去看了亲戚也帮助了他人。

In my growth, experienced a lot of things, they are like a boat, echoed in my mind, from time to time roundabout. They are like the shells on the beach, some "brilliant" and some are "ugly". But the most forgotten or childhood of a past.

It was when I read the second grade, the weather was sunny, sunny. I am accompanied by a good mood to go to school, when I go to school waiting mood does not seem as good as that, because I found that I forgot to take this with the operation. My mood suddenly like fifteen bucket of water - seven on eight, the action is also hurriedly chaos, I do not know what to do? If you go home now to find the job, then back and forth time is not enough, if the re- Time is not enough When I was so embarrassed, my desk said, "Whats the matter?" I told him the truth of the matter. He gave me a new job and said to me, "With me!" I took the job and told him, "Thank you, I will give you." Heart is extremely grateful to him, he really is my savior ah. When I was writing, I was worried about the teacher. The classmate told me not to be afraid, and then looked at the teacher for me. The classmate is like a soldier for me. I paid the job in time. The heart of the stone finally came down. Soon the teacher came ...

From this one thing, I feel the power of friendship, this power is extremely powerful; this makes me overcome many difficulties, can Qi Qi Jin. It made me memorable for a long time.

At the coming of the new year, it is also the time for one of the biggest

tennis matches, the Australian Open. Since Li Na won her second grand slam here,

more Chinese people fall in love with tennis. One of the popular male players,

Roger Federer, who is more than 30, but he is still in the top level. The fans

hope their hero can enjoy the match and they didn’t expect the next grand slam.

But Roger made it happen again. He defeated his great rival, Nadal and won

Australian Open. The world was cheering for him, and they witnessed this great

man to make his career successful at the old age. If we have dreams, it is never

too late to pursue. People always take the age as the excuse, actually, they

lack of persistence, which differs them from successful men.

The Great Wall is the symbol and pride of China,and it is famous all over the world.

But,do you know about it?Let me tell you something about it.The Great Wall was first built during the Qin Dynasty,which was the beginning of the Feudal Society of China.Hower,it was not what it is now.It was very short.The following dynasties continued to build it It became longer and longer and finally reached to about 5000 kilometres,winding from the Shanhai Pass,north-east of China to the Jiayu Pass,north-west China.

Being solid and strong ,the Great Wall acted a very important part,protecting the governors and their people from being attacted by their enemies in ancient China.

Nowadays,the Great Wall has become one of well-known interesting places of China,attracting millions of visitors througth the world.

今天放学回家的路上，我远远看见有一个人在垃圾箱里找什么东西，我觉得很奇怪。

Today, on my way home from school, I saw a man looking for something in a dustbin. I thought it was strange.

我走近一看，原来是一位老奶奶，她头发花白，满脸皱纹，身上穿着破破烂烂的衣服，一双手乌黑乌黑的在垃圾箱里寻找着。突然她的脸上露出了一丝微笑。原来，她找到了几个空汽水瓶。我想：几个空汽水瓶只值几分钱，她这么大年纪，本来应该在家里舒服地生活，而她却在这么脏的地方捡垃圾，她家里一定很贫穷，她好可怜哦！

I approached to see that it was an old grandmother with grey hair, wrinkled faces, tattered clothes, and a pair of dark black hands looking in the dustbin. Suddenly there was a smile on her face. It turned out that she found several empty bottles. I think: a few empty bottles are worth only a few cents. When she is so old, she should have lived comfortably at home, but she collects garbage in such a dirty place. Her family must be poor and she is poor!

我看了心里很难过，我把妈妈给我吃早饭的钱给了老奶奶，老奶奶对我说：“你真是一个孝顺的孩子，谢谢你！”我赶忙说：“不用谢！”就背着书包回家了。

I was sorry to see that. I gave my grandmother the money she gave me for breakfast. The old woman said to me, "you are really a dutiful child. Thank you."!" I hasten to say, "no thanks."!" I returned home with my schoolbag on.

回家的路上我心情非常好，因为我今天做了一件有意义又难忘的事情。

On my way home, I was in a good mood, because I made a meaningful and memorable thing today.

Today’s story is about Mary ,a girl from the US.She’s now studying in China,Beijing.Tomorrow is the Spring Festival. Now ,Mary is staying in China.One years ago,last Spring Festival ,Mary was 11 years old, very little girl. Now, she’s a 12- year- old- girl.Just 1 year,she learns many thing in China.Gradually,she loves China.

Now, she is living in her aunt home.At 9:00 a.m. in Beijing ,Mary make a phone call to her family. When they talk on the phone ,they are so happy .We a

ll know Mary’s mother misses Mary long time. Mary misses her family long time,too. And she was happy to live in China.But talking with family is more important than everything. What a warm story!

From this story, we know noting is important than family. No place like home!

导语：在成长道路中，你有遇到什么难忘的事情吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

It was Sunday. Our teacher Mr Zhu led us to a park nearby.Usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. But today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

We got there at nine oclock. Mr Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

the students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. I was in Group Three. We went to the childrens playground and cleaned all the equipment there. We worked very hard.

At about eleven we finished working. We met at the gate of the park. We all felt tired but very happy.

【参考译文】

那是星期日。我们的老师朱先生带我们去附近的公园，我们通常去公园度假。但是今天我们去那里参加义务劳动。

我们九点到达那里。朱先生把我们分成三组，然后我们开始工作。

第一组的学生种植树木和浇花。第二组的学生忙着收集垃圾留下的游客。他们还打扫了公园里的长椅。我在三组。我们去儿童游乐场，打扫了那里的所有设备。我们工作很努力。

十一点左右我们完成了工作。我们在公园门口相遇。我们都觉得很累但很快乐。

If I had my life to live over...I would have talked less and listened more.

I would have invited friends over to dinner even if the carpet was strained and the sofa faded.

I would have taken the time to listen to my grandfather ramble about his youth.

I would never have insisted the car windows be rolled up onasummer day because my hair had just been teased and sprayed.

I would have burned the pink candle sculpted like a rose before it melted in storage.

I would have sat on the lawn with my children and not worried about grass stains.

I would have cried and laughed less while watching television-and more while watching life.

I would have gone to bed when I was sick instead of pretendingtheearth would go into a holding patter if I were not there fortheday.

I would never have bought anything just because it was practical,would not show soil or was guaranteed to last a lifetime.

There would have been more I love yous ... more Im sorrys...but mostly, given another shots at life, I would seize every minute... look at it and really see it...live it...and never give it back.

Not long ago, in the class was conducted an event -- "red tour". The "red tour" visit "the jianchuan museum". We visited "rhubarb anti-japanese pavilion", "surrender prisoners pavilion", "China military museum" and "defense weapon pavilion". Below I will talk about.

We are "sichuan people," what "sichuan people" spirit? "Rhubarb anti-japanese pavilion" is a record of heroism of millions of us soldiers in sichuan, the heroism of fighting the enemy.

After finished visiting the surrender of prisoners pavilion ", see the person I felt strong China: we "Chinese", in failure, humiliation, before we have a Chinese spirit head hold out a bosom, it is our belief, our dignity. Here, in front of justice warrior will never fall.

Human need "love", "help". "China military museum" reappearance "unity is strength, justice, without boundaries."

We are going to self-defense, do not want to be with his bare hands, "let us see the defense weapon museum of Chinese ancient weapon, pike, broadsword. Chinas strong power of modern weapons, let me feel the powerful of the motherland.

We also love -- planting trees for the museum. Every small tree representing the infinite respect we fight warrior, wish everyone of us to grow. There are more vast sky waiting for the trees!

Museum after that visit, my mind, I feel this museum is the history of China in one hundred, the real national culture in China in one hundred, one hundred, Chinese spirit, make me feel the pride, joy, excitement, strong...

This makes me unforgettable journey!

不久之前，在班上就开展了一次活动——“红色之旅”。这次“红色之旅”去参观了“建川博物馆”。我们分别参观了“川军抗战馆”、“不屈战俘馆”、“援华美军馆”和“国防兵器馆”。下面我就来讲讲吧!

我们是“川人”，有着怎样的“川人”精神?《川军抗战馆》就记录着几百万我们四川军人的英勇顽强，杀敌的英雄气概。

参观完了《不屈战俘馆》后，看这些坚定的中国人时我感受到了：我们“中国人”，在失败，屈辱面前，我们有着昂头挺胸的中国精神，那是我们的信仰，我们的尊严。在这里，正义面前的勇士永远都不会倒下。

人间需要“友爱”，需要“帮助”。《援华美军馆》就再现“团结就是力量，正义面前，没有界线。”

我们要防身，总不能赤手空拳，《国防兵器馆》就让我们看到了“中国民族古代兵器，长枪，大刀的威武。中国现代武器强悍的威力，让我感受到了祖国的强大。

我们还为博物馆献了爱心——植树。每一棵小树都代表着我们对抗战勇士的无限敬意，我们每个人的愿望的成长。还有更加辽阔的天空在等着小树们呢!

参观完了博物馆后的我思绪万千、我感觉到了这博物馆都真实再现了百年中国历史，百年中国民族文化，百年中国精神，令我感到了自豪、喜悦、激动、坚强……

这次的旅途使我终生难忘!

Gratitude blossoms like a colorful flowers on earth.

Try to dead silk, ended.candles burn. Our teacher is the first to be grateful. Her to work day and night, the day so spectacular, so we can better absorption. A minute on stage, the audience ten years work. Teacher, and spent a lot of energy, night, we really worry for the teacher canthus wrinkles, and to the health of the tire hit the teacher concerned.

On one occasion, in our homework, the teacher in correcting a composition. After a while, there are things out of the teacher, a bold classmate see composition, on him a long time, and come down, eyes well up with tears. He told us that the teacher on the composition, word for word reading, write typo circle, beside write correct. Changes in our unidiomatic written statements, write a good sentence is modified, let us remember. Finally still behind the composition writing comments, point out our shortcomings and advantages. The teacher cared more about us! Many care for us!

People around everywhere need to thank, the teacher on how deep our kindness, this seemingly ordinary things, but on the teachers hope. We grew up under the cultivation of teacher, the teacher is not anything in return, it doesnt take our gratitude?

Let us learn to Thanksgiving, with excellent grades to repay teachers kindness to us!

感恩像一朵绽放在人间的五彩的花。

春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。我们的老师就是第一个要感恩的人。她日夜操劳，白天讲的如此引人入胜，是为了让我们更好的吸收。台上一分钟，台下十年功。老师呕心沥血，耗费了许多精力，通宵达旦，我们真为老师眼角的皱纹而担心，为劳累侵袭老师的健康而担心。

有一次，我们在写作业，老师在批改作文。过了一会儿，老师出去有事情，一个大胆的同学上去看作文，他看了很久，下来的时候，热泪盈眶。他告诉我们，老师在作文上一字一字的审阅，写错字就圈起来，在旁边写正确的。在我们写的不通顺的语句里修改，写的好的句子就修饰，让我们记住。最后还在作文的后面写评语，指出我们的缺点与优点。老师多关心我们呀!多呵护我们呀!

人身边处处需要感恩，老师对我们的恩情多么深厚，这看似平常的事情，却寄托着老师的希望。我们在老师的培育下成长，老师却不求任何回报，这不需要我们去感恩吗?

让我们学会感恩，以出色的成绩来报答老师对我们的恩情吧!